SkyPilot
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11/1/2006 10:31 PM
posted awhile ago
Our First Scene Together
Want to play a game? How about I provide a setting, two characters, and the first line of a first scene of a movie that doesn't exist. Whoever wants to further develop the scene can do so under the condition that the content is shorter than five lines. The description of blocking and setting count within the line total. Let's think about beginning/middle/end, but beyond that, no restrictions. Characters may be added. The person who ends the scene gets to title it.
[RALPH and CARY in Ralph's office. You know those little hanging metal ball clacker things? RALPH has drawn a ball back and is about to release it.]
RALPH: I try...
[Releases ball, which sets the toy going.]
RALPH: But I gotta react in kind.
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Risselada
Posts 2068
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11/4/2006 11:02 PM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
[Cary is a 56 year old man with a wrinkled face like leather. Standing lanky at a height well over six feet, his limp and straight grey hair slides down every side of his head. He peers through his bushy eyebrows and the cloud of smoke coming out of his thick cigar]
CARY: You know what I think Ralph? I think you need to stop playing with those little balls on the table there and start remembering the balls that God gave you. Are you a man or a fuckin' turd going wherever the plumbing is going to take you? Answer quick, I don't have time for anything less.
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porcupine
Posts 97
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11/8/2006 4:39 PM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
[Ralph gets up and walks over to a table on which there are several loaves of bread. From a mini-fridge beneath the table he removes a jar of mustard.]
RALPH: Look, I told you before, it's a long-term investment, we need to be patient. [He starts spreading mustard on bread] The Portal gave us a plain ham sandwich, we raise the bar slightly: mustard. The portal will only trade up in small increments, you know this. [Having finished the sandwich, he tosses it into a whirling black and green portal on the other side of the room.]
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SkyPilot
Posts 576
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5/10/2007 12:10 AM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
[Out of the same portal flies another jar of mustard and a coconut. The mustard jar breaks at the feet of Ralph and the coconut bops Cary in the face.] CARY: Arrrrrgh! [crushed cigar dangles from mouth; looks like one of Elmer Fudd's gun barrels after it's exploded ] RALPH: Eye for an eye! CARY: Daaamn! [throws cigar on floor and stamps it out] Eye fer an eye ain't good enough! Ya gotta throw
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AndyLaBryn
Posts 47
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5/10/2007 1:54 PM
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Re: Our First Scene Together
(Cary bends over and swipes the coconut off the floor and coils back as far as possible to throw the coconut at the portal. Just as he reaches his peak, a man jumps through with an uncanny resemblance to Ralph's dead father) Cary: What the hell.... Ralph: Damnit, I knew this fuckin thing would only bring us trouble! (Ralph retrieves a sawed off shotgun from underneath the desk calmly).
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Risselada
Posts 2068
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5/10/2007 3:14 PM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
(Ralph lifts the shotgun deftly with one hand and takes perfect aim. He fires. The man's entire torso explodes and the rest of his body is thrown back into the portal) Cary: Wasn't that your old man? You sick son of a bitch. Ralph: Maybe. But like I said, I we have to raise the bar.
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izabellayessi
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5/11/2007 2:09 AM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
Mysterious Sexxy Stranger: As Ralph stands there all alone and drenched with blood and driping with sticky and strong odor of blood in the air...A lady walks in with a catwalk that made everyone stare and dark glasses that hid her soft eyes and a strong body that gave her away that she is a fighter with a purpose. Her leather pants and short blouse and black jacket made her even more wicked. Look at me Ralph I want to take you to a place where no one will know you and the world will forget that you even fucken exist,the moment I saw you I know that your a "Speacial ***"And I want to show you the way to my world and the reality that if you take as real it will exist and no"I'm not on drugs".C'mon bebe follow me,Don't ask how and why ? I met you but,wonder if your coming back?
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mattypro
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5/11/2007 3:37 PM
posted awhile ago
Re: Our First Scene Together
Ralph looks at the Mysterious Sexxy Stranger with a mixture of wonderment and revulsion: "What the hell?" he half chokes out. The Mysteriousl Sexxy Stranger raises her right hand...and takes off the Mysterious Sexxy Stranger costume to reveal.....Ralph's father. Ralph begins to weep softly. "I can't lose you....you sick, twisted....." *sob, sob* Raph's father: "HAHA gotcha you stupid son of a....well, actually, your mother was quite....BUT I DIGRESS....How does it feel to know you just shot Cary?"
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AndyLaBryn
Posts 47
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5/14/2007 12:45 PM
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Re: Our First Scene Together
Ralph suddenly loses strength in his legs and collapses to the floor like a bag of calculators. The only thing in his field of vision now are the legs on the edge of the desk and the bottom of the door that leads to the bathroom. Ralph in a state of paralysis realizes he's not able to speak let alone stand or perform any usefull motorskills. A thick white smoke begins to creep from under the door to the bathroom, a brilliant flash of green/yellow light consumes the room, someone shouts "CLEAR!" into Ralphs ears. Eager to move and gain understanding of whats happening, unable to even blink his eyes....
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